Elevator Pitch #3

I didn’t really receive any feedback on my second elevator pitch. But, my second pitch did include some points that were made in the first pitch. My plan is to keep my pitch exactly like the second one, but a little more slowed down, and more interactive. I did find that on my third pitch it was less robotic and more natural. I felt like I knew the information way better than the first time I performed this pitch, it was actually my business.

Video link: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ZDV5ELwoe3Y

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  1. Hey Elly,
    Sorry to hear you didn't get any feedback on your second pitch. I agree that too speaking too fast can sometimes be overwhelming for the consumer to listen and take all the information in at once. It is good to hear that you felt more comfortable with your third pitch! I also said my third pitch with a lot more enthusiasm than the previous two.

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