Elly, Wow, Elly, you nailed that. Your pronunciation, enunciation, and inflection were perfect. The idea you proposed is definitely intriguing, and I would love to hear more from you. I do have one critique I will mention - not much was said about how this service actually works and is profitable. Other than that, great job! Respectfully, Maeghan Solanki
Great job Elly. You had a very clear path of your opportunity and how to pursue it. Your energy was great but I would consider perhaps putting more passion into it, but that will definitely come as you memorize it more. I really like your idea and your elevator pitch was compelling to me. I look forward to seeing your future ones.
Elly,
ReplyDeleteWow, Elly, you nailed that. Your pronunciation, enunciation, and inflection were perfect.
The idea you proposed is definitely intriguing, and I would love to hear more from you.
I do have one critique I will mention - not much was said about how this service actually works and is profitable.
Other than that, great job!
Respectfully, Maeghan Solanki
Great job Elly. You had a very clear path of your opportunity and how to pursue it. Your energy was great but I would consider perhaps putting more passion into it, but that will definitely come as you memorize it more. I really like your idea and your elevator pitch was compelling to me. I look forward to seeing your future ones.
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