Elevator pitch



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  1. Maeghan SolankiFebruary 16, 2020 at 6:21 PM

    Elly,
    Wow, Elly, you nailed that. Your pronunciation, enunciation, and inflection were perfect.
    The idea you proposed is definitely intriguing, and I would love to hear more from you.
    I do have one critique I will mention - not much was said about how this service actually works and is profitable.
    Other than that, great job!
    Respectfully, Maeghan Solanki

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  2. Camila ParraFebruary 17, 2020 at 8:31 AM

    Great job Elly. You had a very clear path of your opportunity and how to pursue it. Your energy was great but I would consider perhaps putting more passion into it, but that will definitely come as you memorize it more. I really like your idea and your elevator pitch was compelling to me. I look forward to seeing your future ones.

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