Reading Reflection
1. I thing what really surprised me to hear was that Jobs had an extremely rough startup. He literally cane from nothing , and was able to build such a successful company that we know today. He used his surroundings to be inspired and propel himself forward, all throughout the book Jobs showed extreme tenacity. Jobs mentions something called an RDF ( Reality Distortion Field). It’s basically him changes his reality until it matched what he seen in his mind. This is very inspiring to be because many times our surroundings don’t match up to what we are envisioning, so we basically give up. But, having an RDF forces us to keep working to have both our imagination and reality line up. Jobs wasn’t the easiest to work with. So something I would say I least admired about him would have to be his attitude. He didn’t really appreciate the people around him. He tried to excuse his bad attitude with nice words, but that didn’t make up for the fact that he was very irritable and ...
Elly,
ReplyDeleteWow, Elly, you nailed that. Your pronunciation, enunciation, and inflection were perfect.
The idea you proposed is definitely intriguing, and I would love to hear more from you.
I do have one critique I will mention - not much was said about how this service actually works and is profitable.
Other than that, great job!
Respectfully, Maeghan Solanki
Great job Elly. You had a very clear path of your opportunity and how to pursue it. Your energy was great but I would consider perhaps putting more passion into it, but that will definitely come as you memorize it more. I really like your idea and your elevator pitch was compelling to me. I look forward to seeing your future ones.
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