Forming an opportunity belief
I believe there is an opportunity to solve the problem of a lack of childcare in various cities in Gainesville being plagued by poverty. I would like to solve with problem with something that has more weight than a simple band-aid to the issue. The need that I would like to focus on is the insufficient childcare opportunities for people who have less than ideal lives. This is something that won’t run only through the day but a solution that would be open 24 hours of the day. This need is mostly found in neighborhoods that house a lot of minorities, single family households, and within the homeless community. This need has always existed, and it’s only getting worse with time. My attention is on this need because of observation. Being raised in a somewhat sheltered family, and now coming into adulthood the world isn’t looking as cheery as my family raised me to believe. Being aware of these issues that have been around longer than me is just the beginning, making an actual change and pr...
Elly,
ReplyDeleteWow, Elly, you nailed that. Your pronunciation, enunciation, and inflection were perfect.
The idea you proposed is definitely intriguing, and I would love to hear more from you.
I do have one critique I will mention - not much was said about how this service actually works and is profitable.
Other than that, great job!
Respectfully, Maeghan Solanki
Great job Elly. You had a very clear path of your opportunity and how to pursue it. Your energy was great but I would consider perhaps putting more passion into it, but that will definitely come as you memorize it more. I really like your idea and your elevator pitch was compelling to me. I look forward to seeing your future ones.
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